Your gefunked gaiety is perverting my last nerve
and it must yield, he said through a muffled space mask.
You work too hard for all your pay
somedays you need just playyyy
IIII.. feeeel like... flyyyyyi yunng
the other sang through his comlink,
dancing around gayly from within his heavy suit
Something like this requires your full and undivided attention
to every last detail
Where are your 'ead at right now... he paused.
Its just purely selfish not to do the work you were assigned
his tone was cooled, it struck against a polarized UV faceshield,
reverberated through his mic
The whole project's gone defunct anyway.... he trailed off,
clunked steps fell heavily against the ground,
he was off, off and away
By now you know you are acting like a damned fool.
Now stop jollywhakerin' yourself all around,
you're going fall into one of these pits...
He only heard soft inflections and a little humming
he looked over and his partner was leaning backwards
I just want to be pulled up into the sky,
he said briskly stumbling backwards
chest exposed, his arms draped wide
By now he had dropped his blowtorch and welding element
it fell upright and it showered sparks across an obelisk surface
he lunged towards his partner, thinking
that gas has made him mad, poor lad
I don't believe I'll manage it
A moment came when he couldn't get another step
it wouldn't fit underneath him.
When your body is trying to fall
and you won't let it,
the moment when it is allowed,
the gravity floats away from beneath you
you reach a state of weightlessness
it is said to be euphoric
The massive sun that burned
deeply orange, so near to this marblous planet -
it bore through his faceshield
he felt the rays on his face, and he smiled
All he heard was one breath
one deep, satisfying inhalation that whispered through his comlink
and then he was gone
saw him fall straight out of sight
Damn near should've caught that one,
the bloody chaps they send me out 'ere
The moment he felt his legs fall out from beneath him
felt space suspend him,
seemed as if it would never end
the warmth on his face caressed his cheeks
light filled up his mask
so he closed his eyes
He lay on a bed of clear vacummous space
and his suit
deeply saged lithium illuminated brilliantly above him in the gama light
as he fell for thousands of meters
down the magnificently gargantuent support shaft
it fell deep into the landscape
his suit diminished into the indistinguishable
the suit fell motionlessly into the darkness
He stood at the top watching him fall
He looked up towards the coral orange sky
the spectrumful light spun and danced before across his face
A tear came to his eye
one for joy
one for pride
The above piece is a word painting and therefore uses language that is not, in the English tradtion , "proper" usage.
this one kind of took me by surprise by I like the way you try this new angle
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